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Your smile is like the new moon of Eid
Your face is like the full moon of spring
Your eyes are like the eclipse of the sun
Your hair is like the cloud of monsoon
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Asif, I must say that your poem reminded me of 'The Song of Solomon' too, and that is a compliment. I'm glad you explained about the river, I have never heard of it, and would love to know why the water is black. Enjoyed your poem.
I like this poem. It reminds me a little of the Song of Solomon, in the Jewish/Christian Old Testament. It is a good start, but looks incomplete a bit. Keep working on it, and it could turn out really good! :)
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2/27/2026 2:46:33 AM # 1.0.0
YOUR POEM IS VERY NICE