I really miss
the little hollow of your neck
where sighs collect
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I read this two times, because at first, the 'when kissed with kisses' struck me as a little reduntant, but after the second time, I heard it, like a song, the rhythm would be off without the 'kisses' - and then it struck me as very effective, very sensitive - as my fiance, Ben, knows & loves this place on me, too. Nice read, Donall. Welcome aboard.
i predict a lot of people coming back to read your stuff mr d. lovely to read.
The more I read, the more I want! ! Wonderful love poetry, good for a sigh or a sweet rememberance!
You have such a lovely and loving touch and your emotional landscape is rich and strange...even the littlest moment is transformed in your hands and this is just beautiful. You are a magician and can transform ordinary words into beautiful things as you cross the frontiers of your imagination. Superb! love Dee Dee