Your Exclusion Poem by Binayakumar Mohanty

Your Exclusion

Rating: 5.0


You couldn't coexist
with sages and seer
could not share
resource with
farmers and warriors
as you were not
a book swallower
but a thought seer
as you had a novel face
you were removed from
the race.

Thursday, December 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: competition
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bhakti Sharma 29 October 2018

You could not coexist with sages and seers.Lovely lines.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 December 2017

as you had a novel face you were removed from the race. Quite true for many of us at different planes. To be one among many is to switch off, or retardate all engines of the soul. 10+++ for the sharing. Subhas

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Binayakumar Mohanty 27 December 2017

Thanks for such a nice comment.

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