Often
I'm ecstatic,
transcend of
earthly Me
longing for You
in a magical euphoria.
Never tried
knowing
when started
never asked why
But,
feel your breath
in every deeper pain
I have.
Your color
like magnificent rainbow
in the fluid oozing out
of every wound.
I become archaic.
In birds flutter
in the frogs croak
and in the
horror of the storm
I feel your presence.
In the blooming of rose
in my garden
I feel your fragrance
in the humming of bees
as if you are singing.
In every peak of
orgasm of life
I feel You.
Who you are.....!
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Outstanding write, original with very inspired lines, your writing is full of tenderness caressed with a great talent for creativity!
Really this poem was nicely written.....Thank you sir.......
Excellent ode of life! 10+for sure............! ! ! ! ! ! ++++! ! ! !
In the horror of the storm I feel your presence. What an absolutely brilliant line! And so many others! A beautifully passionate ode to love.
really orgasmic poetry metaphorically exstatix great poetry friend no wonder he composed his for u read my Moms Smiles will u too
A nice romantic poem indeed... Beautifully penned.10+ With best wishes.
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I would like to translate this poem
But, feel your breath in every deeper pain I have Your colour like magnificient rainbow in the fluid oozing out of every wound. Love this stanza, a nice sharing. Thank you sir for this poem. 10 for the poem.
Thanks for your nice comments.I loved it.
it is a great poem shairing.i agree suratha