Who You Are! Poem by Binayakumar Mohanty

Who You Are!

Rating: 5.0


Often
I'm ecstatic,
transcend of
earthly Me
longing for You
in a magical euphoria.


Never tried
knowing
when started
never asked why
But,
feel your breath
in every deeper pain
I have.

Your color
like magnificent rainbow
in the fluid oozing out
of every wound.

I become archaic.

In birds flutter
in the frogs croak
and in the
horror of the storm
I feel your presence.

In the blooming of rose
in my garden
I feel your fragrance
in the humming of bees
as if you are singing.

In every peak of
orgasm of life
I feel You.

Who you are.....!

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Friday, November 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: longing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to You.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suratha Kumar Rout 04 November 2017

But, feel your breath in every deeper pain I have Your colour like magnificient rainbow in the fluid oozing out of every wound. Love this stanza, a nice sharing. Thank you sir for this poem. 10 for the poem.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 04 November 2017

Thanks for your nice comments.I loved it.

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Rajendra Rout 10 November 2017

it is a great poem shairing.i agree suratha

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Hazel Durham 05 November 2017

Outstanding write, original with very inspired lines, your writing is full of tenderness caressed with a great talent for creativity!

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 03 November 2018

Really this poem was nicely written.....Thank you sir.......

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 02 September 2018

Excellent ode of life! 10+for sure............! ! ! ! ! ! ++++! ! ! !

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Richard Wlodarski 12 January 2018

In the horror of the storm I feel your presence. What an absolutely brilliant line! And so many others! A beautifully passionate ode to love.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 November 2017

really orgasmic poetry metaphorically exstatix great poetry friend no wonder he composed his for u read my Moms Smiles will u too

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Binayakumar Mohanty 17 November 2017

Thanks dear poet for such nice comments.I loved it.

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Pallab Chaudhury 14 November 2017

A nice romantic poem indeed... Beautifully penned.10+ With best wishes.

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