Your Eyes Poem by Anwar Patcheko

Your Eyes

Rating: 5.0


Am writting about your eyes, a story that hasnt been told.
And also about my eyes, and what my heart can no longer hold.
Your eyes are something, as if from an angel they were borrowed,
I think they are amazing, they shine like molten gold.

Such eyes exists in books, now i have seen them in real life too.
I think they are beautiful, someone must have already told you.
I keep on looking at them, thats what i like to do.
I see skies in your eyes, although that they are not blue.

In ur eyes i saw freedom where gentle water could flow,
And i saw hope where greener grass could grow,
I have seen different eyes but i wanted to see yours more,
Because in them i saw colours which cant be seen in a rainbow.

And when you mad and they are wet, i swear they twinkle when you are upset.
To me they are the sexiest, beautiful like the sunset.
I never liked brown eyes, long before we met,
But after i saw you, they started to be my favorite.

Then my eyes felt for yours, what started like sparks turned to flame,
When my eyes wanted to be wanted by yours, i knew things between us wont ever be the same,
I was already burnt to ashes, when i realised loving your eyes was a problem,
Sorry i loved them too much, i didnt know any other way to love them.

Thought those eyes will set me free, i was wrong they sent me behind bars,
Now am hopeless, like a band of broken guitars,
U see nothing in my eyes, just a black night and cold stars,
While i see blades in your eyes, piercing hearts leaving eternal scars.

Now am lost in your eyes forever, i can do nothing to break the spell,
And my heart is not at ease, it sucks it feels like hell,
What my heart truly feels, only my eyes can tell,
So when my eyes are tears stained, my heart is blood stained as well.

You have gorgeous eyes, it hurts that they see nothing in me,
Now that they've made a choice and unfortunately they didnt choose me,
My eyes wont stop loving you, now they only want your apology,
And they've already forgiven yours for they wont start loving me.

Thursday, April 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes,heartbreak
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nicholas Boateng 08 October 2015

:) nice. the lines could be boring cos the are quite long, but not, cos each line is interesting.

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Godfrey Morris 25 May 2015

They say the eyes are the window the soul. This was an awesome write. I did enjoy reading.

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