Your Eyes Poem by Danny Speicher

Your Eyes

Rating: 5.0


There's a warm wind blowing from southern skies
Under a December evening's full moon
These silver-lined clouds will drift away soon
For some reason, I'm dreaming of your eyes

It isn't memories of nights like these
Or importance of a date that rings true
I don't know why I'm simply missing you
Oh, Lord, how the thought brings me to my knees

Rarely do I wish you back in my life
Rarely do I miss your hand's gentle touch
I suppose I really don't miss you much
Oh, but when I do, it cuts like a knife

Sweetheart, on nights like these with moonlit skies
For some reason, I still dream of your eyes

((December 13th,2008))

Sunday, December 14, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: silver
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tymon White 17 May 2013

Your poetry is indeed rare. It is hard to poetry that is just as honest, eloquent, rhythmical, a truly beautiful. Poetry is generally quite subjective, but I think this is an amazing piece of work. I also like the particular rhyme pattern used in this one, its refreshingly different.

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Fiona Davidson 14 December 2008

What a beautiful honest piece this is...thanks for sharing...

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