Jhonny Thermidor

Your Eyes

Your Eyes

As we were admiring the color of love last night,
Appeasing our thirst like two cats in a fight,
Your eyes were as shiny as the sparkled stars.
They were as admirable as the lights of the bars.

As I was starring at them with no ambiguity
Fears, lies and evasions surround their clarity.
But the reflection of love in them retains me
From trying to quit being sentimentally a softie.

Like the seven wonders of the world,
They fascinate me with their eyelashes so well curled.
Just Like the famous Eiffel Tower in Paris,
I can observe their allure all the way from Ferris.

They rhyme the harmonic melody of my heartbeat
Because their beauty is so stainless and so neat.
Your seductive eyes is my favorite site of tourism.
They shape my emotion and imagination by Romanticism.

Because of January 17th God makes me see,
Their color should reflect the beauty of the sea
Because another page of my life is just turn over
I can only hope they remain part of me forever.

Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 17, 2009

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet SimonHoward The Motivational Poet Simon (1/18/2009 9:46:00 PM)

    May your eyes be forever wet with tears of joy. Wonderful use of words.

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  • John Smith (1/17/2009 6:21:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, great write, thank you for sharing.
    I think It's amazing how many poems you have for your minimal years.
    Keep on writing.

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  • linzi- kidd (1/17/2009 5:56:00 PM)

    this is beautiful.

    incredible..

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