hey.. lol.. 'cheesez'.. i like your poem.. it flows and it shows so much emotion, .. yet its in simplest form.. nice lol.. im lol-ing a lot today (lols) .. much love- MUMV
i wish the part where u said u wish 2 avenge friends so dear.. and u face death without fear waz emphasized just a bit more.... but all in all i liked it.. much love keep writing: -)
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hey.. lol.. 'cheesez'.. i like your poem.. it flows and it shows so much emotion, .. yet its in simplest form.. nice lol.. im lol-ing a lot today (lols) .. much love- MUMV i wish the part where u said u wish 2 avenge friends so dear.. and u face death without fear waz emphasized just a bit more.... but all in all i liked it.. much love keep writing: -)