Your Love, So Cool... Poem by Saheb Mohapatra

Your Love, So Cool...

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Your love, so cool, a piece of soul's token,
How you are lusty and your sculptured snows,
How hearts you soothe with height, God knows,
For eons before, the best he had chosen.
Your height varies though worth, same stays,
With your maple woods shielding forge thickets,
When sun's deserted blue sky gives you mates,
And your beauty never gauged in brief days.
You cry with tears that lures the species,
Your beauty shall bring, on the wane, futile futility,
With frost lurking you when reaches maturity,
And your glittering tracts with luster, not lies.
Your beauty so ancient yet in histories no mention,
Your snow-laden forehead's likely the best creation.

Saturday, December 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this poem is about the hills in winter........
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 18 December 2014

Exquisite composing. All lines are attractive. Many thanks dear Saheb.

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Salini Nair 18 December 2014

all aspects of nature nicely crafted....great work saheb

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Rajnish Manga 13 December 2014

Like you, Sir, I am also a great lover of nature. The description of snow-capped lofty mountains is enchanting. Thanks.

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Saheb Mohapatra

Saheb Mohapatra

Odisha, India
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