Woman Poem by Saheb Mohapatra

Woman

Rating: 5.0


How nice it would be being a woman,
With smiles soothing sad hearts,
With tears burning greed and selfishness,
With pain abolishing deceitfulness,
With love shielding from impediments,
Being a missionary, the Almighty has sent.

So, why is she ignored?
Leading a life of dark hours
Why none welcomes her birth?
The angel of beauty and suavity,
Owning ever the crown of society.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 09 November 2014

This is wonderful... Saheb....... not because it is a praise on women and that I am a woman, but because it has much poetic beauty and depth of thought considering it has from a teenager with little experience of life! Bravo! A 10

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Salini Nair 09 November 2014

The angel of beauty and suavity, Owning ever the crown of society.............................very nicely presented.....great work

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 09 November 2014

Very well thought out piece on woman supposed to be the angel of God scripted beautifully and with maturity and it's amazing to see at this age you are composing poems on subjects that people need to be mature to develop it.......kudos...10/10

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 09 November 2014

Women they are Missionary..ego that ignored them - what we call MANHOOD they existed through muscle power forgetting power of love

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 December 2015

i have a friend Down Under a great poet he but like a gal he looks so he has turned into a woman not only in looks but replaces them with men you know what i mean

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Melvina Germain 29 October 2015

Women need to sit down and actually think about how important they are to this world, they need to realize we are meant to be at the helm. Unfortunately with the constant badgering and put down of men who think themselves God's only gift we find ourselves trailing long behind. That is changing and more and more women are taking their places at the helm and now is the time to continually grow. We who bring forth the children in this world are the most important vessels alive on this earth. Without women there is no world, without women there will be no men and it is women who have the last word and who will make the crucial decision as to whether to bring forth children or not. This might not be easy to swallow but all it takes is for women to realize their importance and to think strategically as to how to rid this planet of the brutes that walk this earth leaving us with only those who want peace and who are a part of bringing forth beings that can enhance and love each other recognizing that all human beings are worthy...Excellent poem...It is those who nourish that ought to rule. This world is a mess and why, think about who rules now…We need great change, the heavy hand, brutality, war mongers and sadistic brutes…will never bring peace to this world…Excellent poem.....

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Khalida Bano Ali 17 November 2014

An impressive and heart touching poem............10

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Akhtar Jawad 11 November 2014

Birth of a female child is not welcomed because of we don't marry the without a dowry.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 November 2014

It is the negative minds of the people which had made it so. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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