Your Memory Poem by Birbal Singh

Your Memory

Rating: 5.0


Your memory touches my mind
like soft breeze
touches a lake
and makes ripples
on the surface,
or it touches
the freshly bloomed leaves
of April.
Your memory touches my mind
like a floating feather fall
and touch the ground,
like first raindrop touches
the hopeful dry-land,
and it touches like a hand of a loved one
, in rough times.
And it comes
like a promising news after
a long long time.
It comes like the warm wind of
May, and makes my passions bloom like roses.

Tuesday, July 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,memory
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lakhdeep singh 26 April 2020

Very nice

0 0 Reply
Jagdish Singh Ramána 18 July 2019

Wonderful! Beautiful imagery. Lovely diction. The memory is lightened by beautiful descriptions and similes. The memory still gyres in poet's mind that makes it live.

1 0 Reply
Dr Antony Theodore 16 July 2019

a floating feather fall and touch the ground, like first raindrop touches the hopeful dry-land, and it touches like a hand of a loved one very fine expressions of love. thank u der poet. tony

1 0 Reply
Manpreet Singh 16 July 2019

thank you Tony, means a lot to me. I appreciate it.

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success