A Promise To My Fiancé On Our Engagement Poem by Birbal Singh

A Promise To My Fiancé On Our Engagement

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I cannot promise you only flowers
cause thorns are inescapable
I cannot promise you only light
cause dark is inevitable
I cannot promise you only joys
cause sorrows are inexorable
I cannot promise you only rain
cause drought can be unavoidable

But I can promise you one thing
I'll always be there for you
I'll be there to pick the thorns
So, flowers will be there for you
I'll be there to illuminate the dark
So, there will be light for you
I will suffer the sorrows for us
So, there will be joys for you
I'll be there through rain and drought
I'll be there through hard and soft
I'll be there through dark and light
I'll be there through woes and delight
Life is not a bed of flowers
But I can promise you one thing
I'll always be there for you.

Thursday, June 27, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 07 December 2020

Very powerfully and movingly penned in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. Great lines nicely put together.

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 July 2019

where there the happy and the sorrow are tolerable together, there the love is everlasting

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Manpreet Singh 11 July 2019

thanx for commenting.

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Manpreet Singh 28 June 2019

thank you for reading my thoughts.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 28 June 2019

First of all I congrats you for your new life, I heard about your engagement. A Poem of great importance, life is not only happiness but also agonies and struggles, it's the man's duty to stand with the other or would say life partner what the poem expresses.

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