Lunar Phantom

Your Mistake, Your Life

they wana hurt me
they wanna beat me down
they wanna take me
they think im a clown
as if i even care
i am the monster tormenting your dreams
i am the venom in your soul
i am the beast breaking your peace
you think im weak
you think im not pretending
i hold the power you seak
the monster in my heart
breaking the very strength
i here your scream
i couldnt care less
you think im helpless
you hurt the ones i love
i cant be taken down
you should've learned by now
i savor how you scream
i savor how you bleed
a taste so bitter
a taste so sweet
you know now
i am not weak

Poem Submitted: Monday, March 29, 2010

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  • Chidori StormChidori Storm (4/12/2010 7:59:00 AM)

    Okay, who the hell inspired you to write this one? Don't get me wrong, it's good, I'm just concerned about whether or not someone had to tick you off to get you to write this. It is very good. Keep at it.☺

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  • Iron Panda 23™ (3/30/2010 12:59:00 PM)

    i love it (x

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  • i love u babe (tandi) (3/29/2010 1:13:00 PM)

    wow this is soo fukin amazing i absolutly love it
    its soo dark like they dont really kno u grr i wish i could write like that hahah good keep going
    i give u a.....13000000 haaha

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