Lunar Phantom

Torment (Sorry If Its Not Good Im Having A Dry Spell) - Poem by Lunar Phantom

im far down
save me now
im gettin pulled
in all directions
i have forgotten
but new memorries
tormment my dreams
the dark engulfed my heart
i cant face it without you
i cant hold your hand
your not holding me back
your letting me fall
im ending where i began
im ending in the dark
only she can bring the light

Comments about Torment (Sorry If Its Not Good Im Having A Dry Spell) by Lunar Phantom

  • (4/12/2010 10:14:00 AM)

    whether you think its good or not... others have their opinion... i like it a lot. (Report) Reply

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  • Chidori Storm (4/12/2010 7:42:00 AM)

    Dude! ! ! Don't you even think for one second that this poem isn't good! ! ! In reality, the shorter poems really are the better ones. Even if Disia doesn't think so. (Report) Reply

  • (4/12/2010 6:30:00 AM)

    That is a good poem. Who is it about? (Report) Reply

  • (4/9/2010 3:43:00 PM)

    i hav no idea y u think ur poems arnt good ther so amzing it dosnt matter if ther dark or happy if u felt like this then it just means u must really like or even love this girl and i think u shood fallow ur feelings well anyways i love this poem and dont underestimate ur writting abillity :) (Report) Reply

  • (4/9/2010 2:46:00 PM)

    very intresting good job (Report) Reply

  • (4/7/2010 10:28:00 AM)

    i likes it^-^ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 13, 2010

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