Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 413,573 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Your Sentiments - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Be together
Forever
And offer
Real feelings to lover

It all matters
And counts
In good relation
For real excitation

You shall want many things
And dream for being
So near and dear
Sans fear

Just believe
And live
In real world
With views firmly held

No one shall ever
Dare
And offend your sentiments
As you try to live in present

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/25/2015 11:13:00 AM)


    welcome Nikhat Bano, Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/25/2015 11:13:00 AM)


    Javed Ahmad · 2 mutual friends What a clarity of saying something.. Unlike · Reply · 1 · 2 hrs Hasmukh Mehta welcome javed Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now Hasmukh Mehta
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/24/2015 9:18:00 AM)


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    Hasmukh Mehta
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/24/2015 9:13:00 AM)


    xa welcome sharon rjohnson Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/24/2015 7:22:00 AM)


    No one shall ever
    Dare
    And offend your sentiments
    As you try to live in present
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 24, 2015



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