dakota Lil 's

Your Smile, Days Your Laugh

Your smile makes my days, your laugh makes my week, your hugs makes my month, your friendship makes my year, your love makes my life.

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 2, 2008
Poem Edited: Friday, February 20, 2009

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  • Paige S (4/21/2009 2:41:00 PM)

    Nice! ! LOVE it! ! 10!

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  • Christina Smith (4/21/2009 2:17:00 PM)

    love does make you whole...

    Just remember in life, ' To the world your one person, But to one person you could mean the world! '

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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (4/10/2009 4:31:00 AM)

    ok.....................................10

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  • Dr Hitesh Sheth (4/9/2009 11:42:00 PM)

    thoughts galore in few words.....................Good Write.............

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  • Cigar Aficionado (3/24/2009 2:30:00 PM)

    They are very nice the lines you write...Thank you....

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  • Kallie Madison (12/9/2008 3:12:00 PM)

    that's so sweet! ! lovely poem

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