Thursday, February 25, 2010

Your Sun An Moon

Rating: 3.1
the sun an moon are always there to warm an shine ur way im ur sun an moon is what im tryin to say like the sun my love for u will never burn out an as the moon lol well im always goin to shine for u even when u think im so far away i pull closer an closer to u every day when the moon turns red i am angry becus your in pain an when the sun gets to hot it means the same becus they are nice an polite the sun keeps you warm an the moon guides threw the night when your gone the sun an moon will die cause the sun cant keep u warm an the moon can no longer be your light.
mr. romantic
Kortnie Smith 19 March 2010
I like this poem but I think you should use shorter lines and spell all the words out instead of shortening them
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this is a GREAT poem...keep writng 10 ;) ~Ashley Lynn Simons~
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