Yu Wnt See Me Cry Poem by I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel

Yu Wnt See Me Cry



I told yu everything,
opened up and let you in,
you made me feel alright,
for once in my life...
now all that's left of me,
is what i pretend to be,
so together yet so broken up inside...
but nomatter what,
you won't see me cry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Red Blooded Black Hearted 04 December 2007

For awhile the first couple o lines sounded familliear and then I remembered dat Kelly Chlarkson song... Brilliant work! I love it! ! !

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Roger Cornish 29 November 2007

Powerful stuf Lady.. Great poem!

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