I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel


Don'T Pick On Emo's! ! ! ! - Poem by I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel

You diss
I slit my wrist
When you cause me pain
I slit the left vain
You break my heart
That’s where it starts
When you pretend
To care
Well how do you dare
It’s just not fair
So I remain
So damn silent
See my stain
It was very violent
I’m just a shadow
A part of the past
A part that could never last
My trickling blood
Is dripping fast
I hear a thud
I just lie and stare
I cry
And wonder why
Why should I be the one to go
Oh, because I’m emo…


Comments about Don'T Pick On Emo's! ! ! ! by I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel

  • (2/16/2008 9:46:00 AM)

    i feels like you cuz i am an emo. Dont be sad, dont care about ppl who pick on emo! i will kick their asses (Report)Reply

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  • (2/5/2008 9:34:00 PM)

    i share your pain,
    your feelings
    your hurt
    i can relate to you
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  • (1/8/2008 12:13:00 PM)

    its its phenomenal i mean im emo for my self buts thats phenomenal its a phenomenal poem will u be my friend? (Report)Reply

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  • (11/19/2007 10:11:00 PM)

    Good girl! This is a really good poem, not just 4 emos, but for anyone who gets treated unfairly or teased until they snap. (Report)Reply

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  • Wandering Scarlet (11/8/2007 12:13:00 AM)

    i may not be emo.....but i totally know wut it feels like to be picked on and basically treated as the dirt we walk on, i totally sympathize (Report)Reply

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  • (11/5/2007 6:36:00 PM)

    i know exactly what youre talking about! (Report)Reply

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  • (11/5/2007 6:35:00 PM)

    r u emo? i'm emo? ...? ...? ...? but i like this poem too. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 5, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, April 22, 2011


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