I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel


Knife With My Wrist - Poem by I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel

I'm gonna draw a picture,
a picture with a twist..
im gonna get a knife,
and draw it on my wrist..
If done properly a bloody fountain should appear,
and from that bloody fountain,
all my troubles wll disappear....


Comments about Knife With My Wrist by I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel

  • (6/7/2009 6:56:00 PM)


    This is one of my favortie poems that you've written. I've read it at least a 100 times. It's really powerful. I love it! (Report) Reply

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  • (9/7/2008 9:30:00 PM)


    This is a really deep poem, this underlines how I feel sometimes. Thankyou so much for sharing

    XxAmie-LeexX
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  • (7/23/2008 7:49:00 PM)


    As far as I know, your troubles will start only then............it's perhaps the last thing one should think of doing. It leaves a scar for the rest of your life and why ever should anyone misuse their bodies thus? God meant it that we should live in peace and harmony.....arya (Report) Reply

  • (5/24/2008 12:48:00 AM)


    Normally cutting poems turn out horrible, and cliche, but damn. I think your the only one that wrote one that I accutly (sp?) like! Keep up the good work! I like your other stuff also! (Report) Reply

  • (3/30/2008 6:10:00 PM)


    This is a really great poem. Sad... but written with so much emotion and truth. (Report) Reply

  • (1/29/2008 11:52:00 AM)


    You put a lot of pain into your verse. Glad I got to read what you wrote and I hope you foster your talent and creativity for many years to come. (Report) Reply

  • (11/15/2007 7:50:00 PM)


    omg i hate that people so young have to feel so hurt
    lots of loves
    xoxo
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  • (11/12/2007 6:21:00 PM)


    CHOCOLATE(srry can't spell)
    and wow i love the poem
    and trust me as much as u try u can't be invisible
    but i wish ppl can be
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  • (11/11/2007 7:47:00 PM)


    wow... deep. great work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 11, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 24, 2011


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