Knife With My Wrist Poem by I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel

wow... deep. great work.

CHOCOLATE(srry can't spell) and wow i love the poem and trust me as much as u try u can't be invisible but i wish ppl can be

This is one of my favortie poems that you've written. I've read it at least a 100 times. It's really powerful. I love it!

This is a really deep poem, this underlines how I feel sometimes. Thankyou so much for sharing XxAmie-LeexX

As far as I know, your troubles will start only then............it's perhaps the last thing one should think of doing. It leaves a scar for the rest of your life and why ever should anyone misuse their bodies thus? God meant it that we should live in peace and harmony.....arya

This is a really great poem. Sad... but written with so much emotion and truth.

You put a lot of pain into your verse. Glad I got to read what you wrote and I hope you foster your talent and creativity for many years to come.