Z(Haiku) Springtime Poem by Alice Cuenca

Z(Haiku) Springtime

Rating: 5.0


torrential rainfall
dead earthworms on the pavement
slushing sound of wheels

Friday, June 13, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 15 August 2008

in between the first and the last line the earth worms lie dead, very meaningfully...wheels on the pavement- adds to poetic beauty...

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