Zapien Poem by Oscar Mork

Zapien

Rating: 4.1


The light went dim in the street of hate
Another night falls It`s your fate
Stage is set, come see the show
Nail them up
and let the blood flow

I hate my hate, hate is flown away
I hate my hate, why would you go away
I hate my hate, please stay

Heal our physic wounds with fear
let our kin dissapear
The show is over, it`s time to go home
Kill your children
let the blood flow

I hate my hate, the endless stain
I hate my hate, ease the pain
I hate my hate, hate is me

Zapien business, survival of the fittest
Killer instinct, we are on the brink of extinction

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetry Hound 16 July 2005

Reads like a lyric not a poem. Not very original or creative. Sorry.

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Emily Martinez 05 June 2007

This poem is deep very discriptive i love it

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Lissa P 01 April 2008

ummmmm....Thats all I can say its very morbid but awesome for that and the way inwhoch you wrote it is kool to but killour children...hmmm great idea lol but really I love the morbidity in this

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Ariel Morris 08 March 2008

you poem was very inspiring. Check out some of my poems. Poet- Ariel morris

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Shaynna Bernal 23 January 2008

hay i just wanted to comment on your poem, i really like it. your style of writing is awsome and you inspired me to write more. i'm not sure if you wrote this because of something that your going through of its just your style but its really good.

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Alisha Lonz 21 January 2008

this is a beautifully written poem, not something one can easily find... i deeply enjoyed this, it reminds me of my own writing

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Crystal Corchado 14 October 2007

Very deep and dark it was beautifuly written keep posting I loved it.

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