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The light went dim in the street of hate
Another night falls It`s your fate
Stage is set, come see the show
Nail them up
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you poem was very inspiring. Check out some of my poems. Poet- Ariel morris
hay i just wanted to comment on your poem, i really like it. your style of writing is awsome and you inspired me to write more. i'm not sure if you wrote this because of something that your going through of its just your style but its really good.
this is a beautifully written poem, not something one can easily find... i deeply enjoyed this, it reminds me of my own writing
Very deep and dark it was beautifuly written keep posting I loved it.
Reads like a lyric not a poem. Not very original or creative. Sorry.
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12/5/2025 5:38:55 PM # 1.0.0
ummmmm....Thats all I can say its very morbid but awesome for that and the way inwhoch you wrote it is kool to but killour children...hmmm great idea lol but really I love the morbidity in this