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Zzzz Crust Vs. Core

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Learning comes in many forms
In life's open school
Even observing kids behaviour
Will help u learn lessons beautiful

We laugh at the kids
For the silly things they do
But just stop and wonder
Are there lessons for us too

A kid munching on bun
To my surprise very great
Left the crust untouched
Only the inner soft core he ate

Herein was a lesson to learn
For finding happiness we all yearn
How will this happiness be earned
When all our energies are burned
On the crust which is our concern
Whereas net sum of life's zing
Is in its softest part to discern

So friennds,

Look beyond the trappings
And look deep within
The crust may be misleading
Strive to reach the core
It is joy of simple things
Which makes your life worth much more..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 26 May 2006

And ode to the softer parts of our personality, they may hold much norishment and strength for our hearts Love Duncan x

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PREETS...WHEW! ...OUTSIDE INSPIRATION REALLY WORKS FOR YA, DOESEN'T IT NOW? ! AH, BUT YOU OWN TH' SAME EVEN OF QUALITY WHEN YOU PEN ON YOUR OWN HEARTBLOOMED MOTIVATION...RIGHT FROM THE '' CORE '' OF YOU...DOESEN'T QUITE MATTER THOUGH...IT'S THE POET THAT DICTATES THE CONSTRUCTION, FLUX AND THE ULTIMATE FINISHED PRODUCT...SUPER WRITE, PREETS...IO...FRANK

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Nalini Hebbar 12 May 2006

you are on the right track...look within...love, nalini

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