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I Wish I Were The Tear Falling From Your Eye

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I wish I were the tear falling from your eye
Gliding down your cheek
Sensing your skin
Soaking up a kiss
Standing tall on your chin
From then on falling,
Falling in a puddle of sorrow
I would suffer less
Not feel so hollow
After giving you a heart break
And ending all that I faked.

But now I am sure,
I’m not on a lie
‘I love you’
To say this everyday I die.
I want to right the wrong
Sing a love song
For you I long
But I know you won’t come back to me.

How I wish I were the tear falling from your eye
For at least I would have the company of-
Your cheek, your skin, your kiss, your chin
Your all
And
Together
We’ll drop In a puddle of love.

I wish I were the tear falling from your eye
But even these wishes are dry.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Forever 16 July 2006

Hey Preeti...This is a departure from your usual ones....and a good one: -)

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Sujata V 16 July 2006

Lovely poem Preeti. You brought out the regret very well! Sujata

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Nalini Hebbar 16 July 2006

my my somebody is sad today! ! ! ...new style? ...reads great...sometimes when you dont think of rhyme you get the right mood into the poem...you worked up the mood quite well...a ten for the new style...love...nalini

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Catastrophe King 24 July 2006

I love this drop-down style of yours.... let's call it a ''drop-down style'' of writing poems..... good try and marvelous results.... I pray you have evaporated from the puddle of sorrow... we all wish you would and fly in the clouds....

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Grace Hays 24 July 2006

very sweet and sentimental...i love it...keep up the good work

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Ferdinand Maniraguha 04 January 2016

dry of words, you are a great poet

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Moon Batchelder 31 August 2006

so nice...what a beautiful desire.... to be that to someone...

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Rajaram Ramachandran 28 August 2006

How I wish I were the tear falling from your eye For at least I would have the company of- Your cheek, your skin, your kiss, your chin I wish I were the tear falling from your eye But even these wishes are dry. What is impossible it is found possible thro' your poem.

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Asma Bahrainwala 28 August 2006

hey preeti.. i liked this 1.. u too r quite good wid words.. :)

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Brian Dorn 16 August 2006

Preeti, this reads like a tear from heaven... great write! ! Brian

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