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I Wish I Were The Tear Falling From Your Eye - Poem by .Pd. is here

I wish I were the tear falling from your eye
Gliding down your cheek
Sensing your skin
Soaking up a kiss
Standing tall on your chin
From then on falling,
Falling in a puddle of sorrow
I would suffer less
Not feel so hollow
After giving you a heart break
And ending all that I faked.

But now I am sure,
I’m not on a lie
‘I love you’
To say this everyday I die.
I want to right the wrong
Sing a love song
For you I long
But I know you won’t come back to me.

How I wish I were the tear falling from your eye
For at least I would have the company of-
Your cheek, your skin, your kiss, your chin
Your all
And
Together
We’ll drop In a puddle of love.

I wish I were the tear falling from your eye
But even these wishes are dry.


Comments about I Wish I Were The Tear Falling From Your Eye by .Pd. is here

  • Ferdinand Maniraguha (1/4/2016 9:16:00 AM)


    dry of words, you are a great poet (Report) Reply

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  • (7/2/2007 11:30:00 PM)


    Such a tall mountain of comments here, and no wonder; you are so
    good with your words, and so original in your content. Nothing old
    and used up to be found in here. I think this poem says so much;
    it seems almost erotic, in a sweet sort of way, which is also unusual.
    Congratulations again.
    (Report) Reply

  • (8/31/2006 8:15:00 AM)


    so nice...what a beautiful desire.... to be that to someone... (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (8/28/2006 6:34:00 AM)


    How I wish I were the tear falling from your eye
    For at least I would have the company of-
    Your cheek, your skin, your kiss, your chin
    I wish I were the tear falling from your eye
    But even these wishes are dry.

    What is impossible it is found possible thro' your poem.
    (Report) Reply

  • (8/28/2006 1:21:00 AM)


    hey preeti..
    i liked this 1..
    u too r quite good wid words..
    :)
    (Report) Reply

  • Brian Dorn (8/16/2006 3:28:00 PM)


    Preeti, this reads like a tear from heaven... great write! !
    Brian
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  • (8/2/2006 1:04:00 PM)


    Absolutely beautiful. Very sad tribute to a great love. (Report) Reply

  • (7/29/2006 12:46:00 PM)


    this. is. friggin'. AMAZING. a different take on your average sad love poem. i love the image of being the tear on one's cheek. its perfect. i love this poem to death. :) (Report) Reply

  • (7/27/2006 2:45:00 AM)


    I love this poem doll. I love the title. Its so sensual in a sad way. Beatiful. (Report) Reply

  • (7/27/2006)


    This is a fine piece of work, a soulful and sorrowful piece of which I can totally relate emotionally. (Report) Reply

  • (7/24/2006 12:07:00 PM)


    very sweet and sentimental...i love it...keep up the good work (Report) Reply

  • (7/24/2006 6:39:00 AM)


    I love this drop-down style of yours.... let's call it a ''drop-down style'' of writing poems..... good try and marvelous results.... I pray you have evaporated from the puddle of sorrow... we all wish you would and fly in the clouds.... (Report) Reply

  • (7/16/2006 4:27:00 AM)


    my my somebody is sad today! ! ! ...new style? ...reads great...sometimes when you dont think of rhyme you get the right mood into the poem...you worked up the mood quite well...a ten for the new style...love...nalini (Report) Reply

  • (7/16/2006 2:38:00 AM)


    Lovely poem Preeti. You brought out the regret very well!

    Sujata
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  • (7/16/2006 2:33:00 AM)


    Hey Preeti...This is a departure from your usual ones....and a good one: -) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 16, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, August 16, 2010


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