Riquetta Elliott

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  • Lanard Boyd (7/23/2009 11:44:00 AM)

    Lil Sis this poem is very interesting and sweet. You are the greatest poet ever! ! !

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  • Jeannie Ann Clark (1/28/2008 11:18:00 AM)

    You asked on your comment about my poem 'A Poem I Could Not See', 'what are you trying to say in this message? '...Explanation: .I read a poem that was dedicated to me by a poet on poemhunter...the poem made no sense and I did not know if the writer was being kind or critical... (my poem referred to his words being 'up and down' and confusing) Turns out he was being kind but I had already written this poem to express my feelings about the writer's 'dedicated' poem to me. I ended up just posting it as one of my poems. Thank you for asking! Yes, I read 2 of your poems, others soon! Thank you for your comments and being truthful! Keep writing, Jeannie

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Best Poem of Riquetta Elliott

'I Feel So Damaged'

Stranger why did you leave us?
What? Is it the responsibility or the mystery beauty your
With?
I see no answer.
I see in my life years of smiles and happiness
But in the years you stranger gave my
Mother the symbol
Of abuse.
Why stranger why?
I see no answer.
Why were you not there for me?
What is it?
To much baby shitting, too much wah, wah or too much
Kissing for your first born child?
I feel so damaged it makes me want to
Vomit out of pain and
Anguishness.
You know what I'm just going to walk
Away because I am not suppose to ...

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