Sitting on a balcony
over looking the city
gray lifeless, out to sea
the first rays of light.
...
She smiled
her elmond eyes
turned at the edge.
A warm glow, came from her.
...
A book, a book
a wonderful book
Robin hood and old frier Tuck.
All in lincan green
...
Only a life
lived for others
is a life worthwhile.
From grand houses
...
I am looking for a sliver
dawn, blue skys
where the land
flows on for ever.
...
The sun is still shining
down english country lanes.
Life changes
the past
...
Gently the wind blows amanda
i can not feel the wind or the sun.
Another day is done amanda
with no place to run.
...
Knights
with ladys fair.
Sunlight
shining in there hair.
...
Moving in the wind
secrets of yesterday
lovers dreams, of tomorrow
through out time.
...
Wondering through the rooms
that are empty now.
The sound of babys crying.
Children sighing,
...
I had a dream.
I spent
the night
with a beautful woman.
...
We are the children
of the forest, and plan.
Living our lives,
our lives, are the same.
...
I am now on a few poetry sites as i think this a way forward for poets no longer are we a few here and there. there are many of us and we will all work to help each other for better poetry. I am enjoying my time on this site, i think i writing a lot better but only you can tell me.)
A Day Begins
Sitting on a balcony
over looking the city
gray lifeless, out to sea
the first rays of light.
Cut across the water
lighting the out lines
of the building pink
turning red to gold
light
as a day begins.
Your style of writing is enchanting to the reader, the simplicity and flow to all your poems and the use of so few words to convey such deep and strong themes is the essence of a good poet, a wonderful poet! You have the skill of 'less is more' and many fellow poets on Poemhunter admire that. Take care, Mel xx
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