A Day Begins

Rating: 3.5
Sitting on a balcony
over looking the city
gray lifeless, out to sea
the first rays of light.
Cut across the water
lighting the out lines
of the building pink
turning red to gold
light
as a day begins.
Wednesday, October 18, 2006
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Aranthabailu Ummar 24 July 2015
Good masha allah it is narrated in good way
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Aranthabailu Ummar 24 July 2015
Good masha allah it is narrated in good way
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Aranthabailu Ummar 24 July 2015
Good masha allah it is narrated in good way
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Aranthabailu Ummar 24 July 2015
Good masha allah it is narrated in good way
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Edgar Stevens 27 June 2015
a day begins as the other day ends...inspring cycle this is...
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Patricia Grantham 27 June 2015
Beautiful poem and nicely stated.
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Jasbir Chatterjee 27 June 2015
very nice poem, great read indeed...
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Gauri Vyas 27 June 2015
very nice imagination. the description is done so beautifully and it truly deserves to be THE POEM OF THE DAY congratulations - Roy Storey
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Ron Flowers 02 August 2008
You paint a vivid picture. Ron
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Andrew Blakemore 19 January 2008
Lovely poem Roy, I can picture every word.10 Andrew
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Fred Babbin 01 December 2007
I like your descriptions - they really catch the feeling, a little like 'The fog comes in on little cat feet..', but I forgot who wrote it..
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Mary Naylor 27 June 2007
Beautifully done! Eloquent. Memorable imagery.
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