A Day Begins Poem by Roy Storey

A Day Begins

Rating: 3.5


Sitting on a balcony
over looking the city
gray lifeless, out to sea
the first rays of light.
Cut across the water
lighting the out lines
of the building pink
turning red to gold
light
as a day begins.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nimal Dunuhinga 27 October 2006

Hey! My dear it's dawn and another day with the old Sun?

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Sandra Fowler 27 October 2006

What a lovely word painting, Roy! I liked this poem very much. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Mary Naylor 27 June 2007

Beautifully done! Eloquent. Memorable imagery.

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Fred Babbin 01 December 2007

I like your descriptions - they really catch the feeling, a little like 'The fog comes in on little cat feet..', but I forgot who wrote it..

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Andrew Blakemore 19 January 2008

Lovely poem Roy, I can picture every word.10 Andrew

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Aranthabailu Ummar 24 July 2015

Good masha allah it is narrated in good way

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Edgar Stevens 27 June 2015

a day begins as the other day ends...inspring cycle this is...

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Patricia Grantham 27 June 2015

Beautiful poem and nicely stated.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 27 June 2015

very nice poem, great read indeed...

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Gauri Vyas 27 June 2015

very nice imagination. the description is done so beautifully and it truly deserves to be THE POEM OF THE DAY congratulations - Roy Storey

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Roy Storey

Roy Storey

10 september 1939
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