Mrs Samra Haq
Mrs Samra Haq
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Mrs Samra Haq Biography
I am fond of reading books, and writing poems. I am a housewife and I have written 103 poems and posted 6 poems on different websites. I had participated in the World Movement Poetry contest in August 2011 and my poem entitled " Life" was initially nominated and then selected in the final stage. I had received excellent remarks on it and ...
Mrs Samra Haq Poems
I am a kite
I can go everywhere site by site
My work is to fly
To touch the sky
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It was a night time
And I was sitting in my garden
I saw so many stars saying to everyone
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I am a rose
I am the King of all flowers
I come in many shapes
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'GOLF-THE GAME OF FAME'
I was watching this golf tournament through the visitor's window
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Mrs Samra Haq Comments
I don't very much care for this poem, pardon me. But the kite is not free, the string is in someone's hand. It can fly only as far as it is let to go. A kite needs wind, string and someone to fly. The poem is kind of childish. It has no substance.
Samra, your strict rhyming scheme contrasts very nicely with the image of the kite as it flows freely through the air, I liked this very much. I feel there is still a little work to be done on some of the lines as they are a little clumsy in construction but it would be worth doing this.
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10/18/2021 11:41:52 PM # 1.0.0.736
Samra: I enjoyed your poem To touch the Sky. Not every one feels the freedom to fly and touch the sky. You express your sense of freedom and clarity of purpose. Sincerely, Phyllis T. Halle