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Samra Haq
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Samra Haq Poems
- To Touch The Sky I am a kite I can go everywhere site by ...
- Mirror Mirror, Mirror I am putting you on my front ...
- Needs “NEEDS” A friend in need A friend in deed Needs are ...
- Star Twinkle star, twinkle star You are up above so ...
- Rain Rain rain - do come again Cause you offer much to ...
- Rose I am a rose I am the King of all flowers I come in ...
- 'You Can See The Sky' The sky is so high And you don't have ...
I am fond of reading books, and writing poems. I am a homemaker and I have written 103 poems and posted 6 poems on different websites. I had participated in the World Movement Poetry contest in August 2011 and my poem entitled “Life” was initially nominated and then selected in the final stage. I had received excellent remarks on it and it is in the process of being published in February 2012. I ... more »
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To Touch The Sky
I am a kite
I can go everywhere site by site
My work is to fly
To touch the sky
I am in so many colors
As you can see the sky with flying flowers
I don't want to hide
I can fly everywhere side by side
I can fly in the day light
So everyone can see me with sight
I have no sense at all
I have no fence at all
But still my work is to fly
Birds are singing a song in the sky
My work is to fly
To touch the sky
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Samra Haq's poems are really good!
A nice poem. It reveals the orient spirit.
I don't very much care for this poem, pardon me. But the kite is not free, the string is in someone's hand. It can fly only as far as it is let to go. A kite needs wind, string and someone to fly. The poem is kind of childish. It has no substance.
Samra, your strict rhyming scheme contrasts very nicely with the image of the kite as it flows freely through the air, I liked this very much. I feel there is still a little work to be done on some of the lines as they are a little clumsy in construction but it would be worth doing this.
put life on here i want to hear it thanks
Samra: I enjoyed your poem To touch the Sky.
Not every one feels the freedom to fly and touch the sky. You express your sense of freedom and clarity of purpose.
Sincerely, Phyllis T. Halle