Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

Comments about Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

  • Sharmila Martin (4/25/2006 5:25:00 AM)

    I just wanted to say that I enjoyed your writing. The emotion that you layed out
    I was able to identify with on many levels.. I am still trying to hone my skills so if you could look at some of my poems & give me feed back I would greatly appreciate it... Thanks

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Best Poem of Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

Drowning

You say you love me
This i know is true
though it is rarely shown by you
It's not something you hear
and then believe
You feel it flowing through you

You're so confused about your life
your commitments overshadowing your light
which radiates from you almost no more
Getting lost in your dreams
Pulling you below the sea
Keeps you under water
And still you say you're loving me?


19 August 2004

Read the full of Drowning

That A Clock Could Spin

That time could leap-frog
and life itself hop forward.

It's amazing how from confusion
you are thrust into the bosom of beauty.

From the ashes of death
wonder can sprout
and lovliness raises its head.