Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

Rookie (1 September 1986 / East London, South Africa)

Release My Mind - Poem by Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

I wish you would leave
let my body be at peace
Release my mind!
from its caged existance

Your only purpose is to torment
playing with my mind
pushing the boundries
and trying the sanity

You have no logic
or systematic approach
attacking the light
held within a soul

Your name is darkness
Your purpose is terrible
You release no mind
And wish to encage all


Comments about Release My Mind by Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

  • (11/27/2005 11:23:00 AM)

    your name is darkness says it all......beautiful, powerful, clear poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/18/2005 10:07:00 AM)

    Great poem and I enjoy how you said it with passion. Somehow, I don't know maybe this poem can be talking about being a captive and wanting to be free from someone's hand!

    Sincerely, Aaron Rigodon
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  • (11/18/2005 5:52:00 AM)

    Very nice Stephanie. I'm enjoying your work very nice. sincerely, Mary (Report)Reply

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  • (9/14/2005 11:00:00 PM)

    Your mind can never get that release.Real good work
    Regards
    Thomas
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 8, 2005

Poem Edited: Friday, May 21, 2010


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