Tori Bachue

Rookie - 22 Points (29/09/1994)

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I suppose I can be short on this one.
I'm just a teenage girl, with a wish to write proper poetry some day. I'm planning on using this page to see what your opinion is on the attempts I make at that. As I'm still young, I guess my subjects can be a bit childish and all, but anyway...
Any (constructive) criticism is welcome! more »

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Shooting Star

Time stops whenever I see you
Heaven nor hell comes close as description
Of how I feel, even when you hate me too
My addiction
Anywhere I go, I stay with you at all times
My feelings go further, and you'll never know
And I don't know if I'll ever be fine
Rare as you are, your picture hits me like a flood-like flow
King of everything, that's what you are
Even my most guarded core of heart succumbs to you
You're my shooting star

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