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Kristi Wilson
(11/5/2009 9:35:00 AM) |
thank you dear sir for inviting me to comment, its wonderful! and it makes you think some ja... fantastic
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Tracy Scheepers
(11/2/2009 1:17:00 AM) |
The belief and faith in 'Life after Life' is what keeps us motivated in this world which sometimes makes a feel a little hopeless. Thank goodness for that!
Thank you for sharing this - short, sweet and so refreshing.
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Liliya Mazur
(11/1/2009 2:18:00 AM) |
We are a 'breath of passing air' but not all that have breath have life. We live by faith...not by sight. 'What the world could hold' is not necessarily what makes us 'hungry for life' but it is the hope of God that opens our eyes and shows us that the 'breath of passing air' can be the gentle breeze that can cool a sorrowed heart.
With belief in another life
As pilgrim of the infinite.
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Josiah Lozier
(11/1/2009 12:42:00 AM) |
Nicely done! Good depth and reflective as the other comments have said.
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Walterrean Salley
(10/31/2009 12:13:00 AM) |
yoonoos, this reminds me of the Masters (Shakespeare, Hughes, Keats....) It's a poem of great depth, beautifully done. Thanks for sharing.
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Mrs. Blue
(10/31/2009 12:07:00 AM) |
That was very beautiful and very deep. i love the part about 'and hungry for life we die' because that's so true.
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Sarah Franks
(10/30/2009 10:00:00 PM) |
the theme and phrases are amazing and beautiful i like it 10+
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John Mccullagh
(10/30/2009 1:53:00 PM) |
Very pleasant reflective poem. Nicely phrased
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Bonny Babychan
(10/30/2009 7:37:00 AM) |
Beautiful! ! ! and very true, every word of it! !
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