(2nd July / 1981 nairobi)

What do you think this poem is about?

agreement of my unseen lover's

agreement of my unseen lover's,
we were the lover's,
great lover's,
but I let you down more and more,
you are more than them,
but I kept on pursuing them
thinking they would make me new,

they ruined me,
my relatives and friend's,
I only trust my earthly lover of time,
Only time I trust,
Give me hope lover of mine,
Give me that serene thought,

They increased
my agony is all within me,
why I doubt my lover, ?
now I'm in hell for doubting my great lover,
Lover of time and earthly volition,
I disowned my unseen future,
And I be suffering in hell down here.

Submitted: Friday, December 22, 2006
Edited: Tuesday, December 14, 2010


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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (1/1/2009 7:27:00 AM)

    It is evident that the poem is written out of experience. imagination can not have a sharp edge as experience does. good

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