Vijay Sai

Rookie - 307 Points (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)

Cease-Fire - Poem by Vijay Sai

Sensuous sea gulls
Swimming over sea bed
Searching fishes steadily
Succulent sea food they enjoy
Serene life they lead
Situation not the same after this…
Spill of oils in deep water horizon
Spreading shock waves
Sending them shores
Struggling to breathe
Suffocating in total despair
Species so endangered, let’s
Stop them perish and
See them safe and secure!

Comments about Cease-Fire by Vijay Sai

  • Silver Star - 3,324 Points Eugene Levich (5/31/2014 8:09:00 AM)

    A subject- as so often in your writing- that deals with protecting the weak and the innocent. I love birds and have written a number of poems about them. You might like some of them. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,887 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (6/29/2013 4:15:00 AM)

    Oil spill-over menace was really endangering the sea creatures very badly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (12/3/2012 7:28:00 PM)

    a nice structure sad how we treat mother earth and her creatures, nice write (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 885 Points Kaila George (10/14/2012 5:14:00 PM)

    This is very intresting in how you have written each word to intail what life can do when faced with world disaters actually this is brilliant and loved how it flowed thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Otonye Daniel (8/6/2012 4:01:00 PM)

    What more can i say? Sai.. This poem is great! A sublime piece.. Thanks for inviting (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Simon Odhiambo (7/23/2012 5:03:00 AM)

    Cease Fire...a nice poem, well written and cleverly designed. Good play of S words. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Ravi Sathasivam (7/23/2012 2:39:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Well penned. I like the S line continuation........... Tfs (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 404 Points Charles Jagongo Ogola (7/22/2012 2:59:00 AM)

    This a very good poem. Very educative. A good write kep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Swetha Vanakayalapati (6/25/2012 1:30:00 PM)

    floored sir....opening lines of 'S' and vivid description of sea animals their endangered lives....makes it think the strong attention we really need to draw! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 88 Points Jonathan Maldonado (3/25/2012 8:11:00 AM)

    I like this one really gives you something to think about... Isnt it funny how the little things are the things people find hardest to do (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Martin O'Neill (2/16/2012 4:47:00 AM)

    I like this. I wrote a poem about the destruction of the sea in a different style some time ago. It was called Fish Supper in Black and White. I would be delighted if you were to read it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nicole Watnah (8/1/2010 5:59:00 PM)

    It a deep poem :) Very emotional, i feel it inside! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gul naz (7/6/2010 1:55:00 PM)

    we are destructing out own environment you have chosen a very important topic to right on. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (6/23/2010 1:25:00 PM)

    Man is so destructive. A good descriptive poem on an important inviromental issue. Well penned! ; D (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 50 Points Erica Santana (6/15/2010 12:14:00 PM)

    You painted such a beautiful scenery (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Dylon Cain (6/13/2010 10:17:00 AM)

    Nice poem. Very interesting. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lionel Arboleda (6/9/2010 7:52:00 PM)

    Its an interesting poem.
    I like the way the message was being sent. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie majid Alsaady (6/9/2010 12:52:00 PM)

    A great cry to show the contrast between building life and destroying it (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,055 Points C. P. Sharma (6/8/2010 9:24:00 PM)

    A poet's plea to coexist with flora and fauna. Peace flows through this poem. CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emily Espinoza (6/8/2010 6:52:00 PM)

    Interesting.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, June 21, 2010

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