noctiluca scintillans


Commoner To Love


No matter how stiff I
Try to make my heart
It's always just soft enough to feel the love in air
when you are around
won't be so
if you weren't one on earth
especially created solely for me

all my senses they grow sharper
when there's something's about you
so my girl never destitute this child
cause am gonna need you in my old age
when my body starts performing feeble

So would you do honour for me to sit by me side
and talk, how you acquire such a mystic power
to turn me once powerless and then powerful?

Submitted: Monday, July 29, 2013
Edited: Monday, July 29, 2013

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like heat to ice,

Comments about this poem (Commoner To Love by noctiluca scintillans )

  • Gold Star - 13,747 Points Roseann Shawiak (4/11/2014 10:44:00 AM)

    Great poem, especially love the last line: ......how you acquire such a mystic power
    to turn me once powerless and then powerful. Intense! ! Thank you for sharing.
    RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,192 Points Gajanan Mishra (7/29/2013 4:25:00 AM)

    mystic power, good write, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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