valentine white

Rookie (11\22\92 / Los Angeles)

Don'T Walk In Your Big Sister Foots Step! - Poem by valentine white

Every since I was little I use to love my sister shoe
But don't walk in your sister foot steps
I put on my sister shoes and follow her to school
But don't walk in your sister foot steps
I put on my sister blue ekco boots and follow her to the phone booth
Adnd seen her with an unfamiiar crew
Don't walk in your sister foot steps
I put on my sisternew blazzers and follow my sister to the mall
I was standing in the hallway amaze
But don't walk in your sister foot steps!


Comments about Don'T Walk In Your Big Sister Foots Step! by valentine white

  • Rookie *~Kera ~* (3/18/2009 1:35:00 PM)

    To be honest i agree with Mandy. I think that the poem would be better if you finished it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Mandy Ewis (3/6/2009 11:31:00 PM)

    im sorry but i dont think this poem makes any sense! ! !
    it feels like it hadnt finished and it was an interesting poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 10, 2009


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