Mandolyn ...


don't you dare make me smile


when i go under the knife
and come out alive,
don't you dare make me giggle
or squirm.
feed me valium or put me on pot,
but don't you think for one second
'should i tickle her, or not? '

Submitted: Wednesday, August 06, 2014

Topic of this poem: life


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glorious gore means be a bore.

Comments about this poem (don't you dare make me smile by Mandolyn ... )

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (8/8/2014 11:29:00 PM)

    Ok I'll leave my knife and sword on the ship
    so I won't be tempted to tickle a vein.
    Rough stuff, but Valium always helps.
    Last time they gave me intravenous rum.
    I have no idea what they removed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 679 Points Birgitta Abimbola Heikka (8/6/2014 6:02:00 PM)

    Well-written poem about an every-day life event. (Report) Reply

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