Treasure Island

Mandolyn ...

don't you dare make me smile

when i go under the knife
and come out alive,
don't you dare make me giggle
or squirm.
feed me valium or put me on pot,
but don't you think for one second
'should i tickle her, or not? '

Submitted: Wednesday, August 06, 2014

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glorious gore means be a bore.

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  • Captain Cur (8/8/2014 11:29:00 PM)

    Ok I'll leave my knife and sword on the ship
    so I won't be tempted to tickle a vein.
    Rough stuff, but Valium always helps.
    Last time they gave me intravenous rum.
    I have no idea what they removed. (Report) Reply

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