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Savita Tyagi


Esoteric Half


A life time of happening
My little heart is flooded with
Filled to the rim experiences pour
Like waters in deep ocean
Sweet, sultry multi odoriferous
Away from worldly struggle
When darkness deepens
Behind closed eyelids
And inner chambers light up
With occult lights
Body and senses laid to rest
Mind cajoles for life's forgotten sap
Unique images like glow worms
Crawl from mind's crusty fissures
To create strange concoctions
Upon steep planes of subconscious
Truth and illusion merged at once
crossing over three dimensions
One who enjoys unperturbed
Vision and fantasy undisturbed
Itself camera, light and action
For dreams of sugar plum and evenings of fun
My esoteric half extremely intelligent one
Lighting up the dim corners
Venturing through deep tunnels
Sustaining mental tribulations
Always alert and awake
Commands then all movements
And pleasures partake.

11.4.2013

Submitted: Tuesday, March 18, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Topic of this poem: introspection


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  • Bronze Star - 6,774 Points * Sunprincess * (4/8/2014 7:47:00 AM)

    ....I believe it's what we take from our experiences that matter....enjoyed this wonderful piece... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,300 Points Valsa George (3/27/2014 6:53:00 AM)

    More than what we experience directly when we are awake, the mind has hidden chambers and our subcoscious mind is so active, always alert.... even when our eyelids are sealed in sleep and our senses, at rest! It lights up the dim corners... and what all terrible secrets it hides...! Yes human mind is just mysterious... Enjoyed this deep write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 460 Points V P Mahur (3/20/2014 12:19:00 AM)

    Dear Madam,
    The imagery of this poem is fantastic and flow is polite.
    Thanks for nice poem.
    I will try more of your poems and tell my views.
    please reply if possible.
    Thanks. (Report) Reply

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