Mahfooz Ali

Rookie - 49 Points (28 October / Lucknow (U.P.) India)

Font Color='Black'Bbut What About What I Want? - Poem by Mahfooz Ali

Everyone expects something different from me
they all set standards that I can't measure up to.
My parents want a scholar.
My employer wants the perfect employee.
My coach wants a muscular physique.
My dermatologist wants my skin finer.
My employees want me a perfect boss.
But what about what I want?

Comments about Font Color='Black'Bbut What About What I Want? by Mahfooz Ali

  • Rookie - 13 Points Anjali Sinha (5/24/2009 1:10:00 PM)

    you must not want anything
    for once
    let all others have what they want in you
    just dont be your own
    do and be what others want
    got it
    hey ali
    you gottttttttttttt itttttttttt
    wow a lovely poem
    a sure tenner from meeeeeeee anjuuuuuuuuu (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/24/2009 1:01:00 PM)

    Nice poem, nice ending 10+++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 24, 2009

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