L. C. Brown


Grandsons - Poem by L. C. Brown

When I first saw you,
tears filled my eyes.
With out a son of my own,
you filled my life with pride.
That little boy I picked up
to squeeze,
has turned into a man.
Only squeezing I get now
is when you shake my hand.
Some day you may marry,
have a family of your own.
If you have a son or grandson,
you'll know why I wrote this poem.


Comments about Grandsons by L. C. Brown

  • Freshman - 847 Points Shahzia Batool (5/15/2013 11:43:00 PM)

    very natural expression comes at the end...they will get to know these feelings when they willexperience the same...excellent feel it created! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 90 Points John Brown (11/5/2012 8:28:00 AM)

    I have two sons and three grandsons, and was present at only one birth: it was a beautiful moment though. Good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 299 Points Adeline Foster (10/25/2011 12:21:00 PM)

    Ah! a true Grandpop poem! As a grandmother 14 times over; yes, I can sympathize. Now wait 'till the greats and the great-greats come along.
    Read mine - Night Vigils -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 997 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (10/12/2011 9:01:00 AM)

    HOW NICE YOUR POEM IS
    IT SPEAKS OF TRUE EMOTIONS FROM YOUR HEART AND
    A PROMISING MESSAGE THAT HE WILL FEEL WHAT YOU FELT IF HE EVER HAS ONE. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 17, 2010



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