I Hate Life

What do you think this poem is about?

I am the cause of all pain

Huh?
You said you looked into my eyes and saw flames?

No
That can't be
I am happy

What?
You say that you aren't playing a game?

Maybe that's all we're doing
I'm just loosing

And that there is no one is to blame?

See
That's where you are wrong
I am the one to blame
I am the only one to blame
Because I cause all the pain

I Hate Life
Submitted: Monday, February 11, 2008
Edited: Tuesday, February 12, 2008

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  • The Hawk (4/2/2008 7:19:00 PM)

    ...i have nothing to say other than yes, i totally agree

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  • okeydokey #3 (2/13/2008 8:19:00 PM)

    i feel sorry for you...tsk tsk tsk...

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  • Amie-Lee ...... (2/13/2008 6:47:00 PM)

    Keep up the good work

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  • Rani Turton (2/13/2008 6:19:00 PM)

    'I am the only one to blame' speaks volumes. The sensitivity and guilt comes through. But you are not the cause of all pain. Pain is a factor that much more complex than that, isn't it. keep writing and bravo.

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  • angel of Suicide (2/12/2008 3:23:00 PM)

    well done, another nice poem
    keep it up
    angel of suicide

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