Electric Lady

Let's Get Personal - Poem by Electric Lady

This must be love
Because the truth hurts
I can't even begin to say the words out loud
Things happen
Things I can't explain
I'm baring my soul
Without you ever knowing
You seem so far away in your own head
Mick Jagger has stolen our cloud
And I don't mind
For the roses are more passionate
And my heart breathes a silent breath
You caress me with your eyes
But you make love to me with your soul
A soul that has no other reason
Whenever lies fade into the wind
My halo is still above my head
Kiss me and never take it back
You're my guiltiest pleasure
Beyond measure
Beyond everything that is the unknown
I can't escape you
You're always here
Oh the tears.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I'm a ball of confusion! ! ! !

Comments about Let's Get Personal by Electric Lady

  • Silver Star - 8,437 Points Michael Mcparland (10/30/2014 11:27:00 PM)

    Truly a magnificent and touching expression of love. I feel your words and very emotions in my heart. A perfect 10. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 808 Points Alice Cordy (10/30/2014 9:24:00 PM)

    Lovely written, thoroughly enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,800 Points Leah Ayliffe (8/27/2014 9:34:00 PM)

    Fabulous fabulous fabulous! Never stop writing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,075 Points Mandolyn ... (8/27/2014 7:45:00 PM)

    you caress me with your eyes
    but you make love to me with your soul

    ^ YES! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,355 Points Mr. Nobody (8/27/2014 7:23:00 PM)

    No, you are a yummy lusty cookie
    with plenty of hungry souls around

    A+ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 26, 2014

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