Ulveena Aitzaz

Rookie (31st August,1995)

Loss Unbearable, Loss Irrepearable - Poem by Ulveena Aitzaz

The death of a twelve year old,
Her sister shed tears,
But the body was cold,
Loss Unbearable, Loss Irrepearable.

She felt all had lost hope,
It was her fault,
'I let go the rope! '
Loss Unbearable, Loss Irrepearable.

'I should have pulled her up'
'I lost grip'
'I should'nt have given up! '
Loss Unbearable, Loss Irrepearable.

'You trusted me! '
'And there is no reason....'
' No you shouldn't have, see? '
Loss Unbearable, Loss Irrepearable.

'No! It's not your fault! ',
Said her sister,
Who lay dead in the vault,
Loss Unbearable, Loss Irrepearable.

Comments about Loss Unbearable, Loss Irrepearable by Ulveena Aitzaz

  • Gold Star - 50,619 Points Akhtar Jawad (4/2/2014 1:48:00 AM)

    The tragedy behind this poem was seriously felt resulting this impressive poem. Write more, you are talented. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Mallory Simonton (2/15/2012 6:47:00 PM)

    I love that feeling in your spine when you read something absolutely amazing. Thanks for letting me feel that! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Johnathan Pherigo (2/19/2009 12:32:00 AM)

    I love this poem! It comes straight from the heart (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kristin F (12/29/2008 10:03:00 AM)

    i love this piece! it gives me goosebumps! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarah Mustang (8/11/2008 5:21:00 AM)

    This poem sent shivers up my spine. A very interesting poem, quite touching. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Janice Nevanen (6/25/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    This poem is quite compelling and intense. It's a well done and shows talent for expressing sorrow. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 7, 2008

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