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Aditi Khandelwal (December 27 1997)
My Sun And Moon (My first love poem! ! !)
You are like the sun which gives light,
The darkness who hugs the sky at night.
You are like stars which gives cheer,
I wish you always stay near!
You are more beautiful than a waterfall,
Like a tree you stand firm and tall.
You are the thief, who stole my love,
But sent back double with the white dove!
You are like the breeze blowing in evening,
Covering in an embrace like a ring.
You are like the fire,
Which burns in me -my only desire!
You are like the rose flower,
Which is bright even in the darkest hour.
You are like pearls, rare to find,
Easy to love and very kind!
You are like the dawn,
Starting of my every morn.
You are more handsome than the moon,
Who was given to me as a boon!
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Lovely poem. Even if you hadn't already told that it is your first love poem, it is not difficult to guess so :)
I'm not a poet or critic but I can say this is the magic of words.. Really so touchy..
its an awesome poem....really loved it....
Wow! fantastic poem Aditi, like it.
You have got the style, you got the class, you the rhyme pattern rock baby rock with romantic poems like this!
Yikes! Aditi it is awesome love poem of yours. Though first it is, still you look like she stoops to conquer.10 ++++ few smiles ha ha ha 10+++++++ says A STRANGER!
congratulation for your first love poem. descent. keep it up. nice Aditi.
*smiles* Very filmy... But, I like it.: -)
The poem is speaking obviously but to whom we don't know. Will it be known to the person it is written for? I thing you should have said somthng about some memorable moments to let him know. A good write... nice thought.
A really wonderful poem, like it.
any body happily ready would be your love...in another way your love is the richest and happiest person in the world....or your love the abstract one gets the best personification...every line of the poem poured tight...with simile and metaphor...i like the poem keep it up...please read my other poem.......