Diane Hine

Silver Star - 3,901 Points (25 July 1956)

Plane Thoughts - Poem by Diane Hine

I’m an idle cabin sitter
miles above the sea’s hard shell.
Minor CO2 emitter;
metal cell’s soft organelle.
Fresh air’s ducted via compressors,
swirled around and soon expelled.
Vented, vapid breath precesses
over the crinkled ocean swell.

Squillions of salty creatures
live beneath the curved blue plate,
building homes with pleasing features
using calcium carbonate.
Surplus CO2 dissolves to
elevate bicarbonate.
Wonder if they’re fast evolving
as the levels escalate?

Evanescing contrails drift but
clear exhaust has twice the mass.
My share of the noxious wind’s a
tonne of CO2 waste gas.
Didn’t think I had it in me –
five hour, one tonne fart attack.
I raise my carbonated spritzer –
‘Bottoms up – adapt to that.’


Comments about Plane Thoughts by Diane Hine

  • Freshman - 732 Points Shahzia Batool (5/2/2013 5:11:00 AM)

    Plane Thoughts are not that Plain... Register-command really... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,074 Points Lyn Paul (4/23/2013 6:37:00 PM)

    Such a clever write with a smelly twist. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Owain Glyn (4/22/2013 10:38:00 AM)

    A chemical masterpiece, with no added ingredients! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,292 Points Kevin Patrick (4/16/2013 1:40:00 PM)

    Most people who fly an airplane are just hoping to get to their destination intact you look at everything precisely with a thoughtful meditative mind, this reminds me of your poem about Bioengineering, including the added humor. If it’s any consolation I walk to most of my destinations within a four mile radius. Stellar write Diane, this emits no CO2 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (4/16/2013 10:55:00 AM)

    You've conveyed your thoughts brilliantly. I think of tonnes of CO2 floating high in the atmosphere. A lovely poem.10 out of 10. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 653 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (4/15/2013 12:07:00 PM)

    A great write Diane, You have portrayed your thoughts in an excellent manner which is really lovely! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (4/14/2013 8:27:00 AM)

    should be squidillions, but really a great poem by the poetess of Perth. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 249 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (4/12/2013 10:37:00 PM)

    its really brilliant and it got a nice fragrant comic within.but i like the me$$age that i saw in the words. Really cool (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (4/12/2013 11:42:00 AM)

    Stewardess, I'd like to change seats!
    and I'll drink to that.
    Great write, comic and intuitive. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,339 Points Valerie Dohren (4/10/2013 2:04:00 PM)

    Clever write Diane - bottoms up! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,117 Points Valsa George (4/10/2013 12:06:00 AM)

    The last two lines give the whole poem a comic twist! ! The image of a cabin sitter watching over the already polluted Earth and adding to the lethal doses of Co2 is very suggestive. Your scientific temperament makes your poems scholarly! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 9, 2013


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