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Jason J. Yu

(May 24,1995 / Gastonia, North Carolina)

Please Choose Me?

By all degree of everything I know,
I've been alone for far to long.
I've been hurt beneath the dirt of hate.
And have drowned in the sadness of my tears.
For I have never felt the warmth of another heart,
beat along the side of mine.
And I have never known anything other than pain,
for everyone I've ever loved has left me,
for wealth, for looks, for cars, for houses,
just to be used and abused against their will.
For all I want from you is your affection.
And the beauty of your sweet complexion.
And our souls to harmonize in the chorus,
as angels will shed their tears in happiness while hearing our song.
I may not be rich, nor have the looks of God.
For I am man, not God, nor animal.
And as a man, I wish to be your everything,
just as you are to me.
I may not be special like the others,
but the one thing I have is a heart to give.
And a life to live with the one I feel is my heaven.
As every second ascends me into God's kingdom,
and dawns the darkness I've felt throughout my life.
He may give you wealth. And he may give you fame.
But what I'm willing to give you is me.
For I am yours and you're my entire world.
And beyond that, you're my life and my afterlife.
So please I beg you, please choose me?
Please choose contestant number three?
For I will give my everything.
My life, my fight, my dignity,
To endure that you are always safe.
Cause without you I will just be dead,
living in a world of love as it kills me.

Submitted: Wednesday, January 22, 2014
Edited: Thursday, January 23, 2014

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Not Poem: Contestant # 1: If you choose me, I'd give you my muscles and my looks; but not my heart.

Not Poem: Contestant # 2: If you choose me, I'd give you my money and my fame, but not my affection.

Contestant Number 3? ......

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