Treasure Island

Tirupathi Chandrupatla


Rain Just Right


Sky was all overcast
Like cow ready to deliver
It started sending rain
Turning into a downpour.

Visibility was poor
It became pretty cool
Puddles started forming
Soon turned into floods.

Rains're always welcome
For the earth that's dry
But not of the heavy kind
That wash away some life.

There's always the right
Amount for everything
Less results in scarcity
More'll cause misery.

Please rain just
The right amount needed
Let lakes get filled
And rivers flow full.

Submitted: Thursday, August 22, 2013
Edited: Sunday, March 09, 2014

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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (8/23/2013 9:37:00 AM)

    Here in INDIA near HIMALAYA range in the state of Utterakhand heavy rain washed the half population on that ares I am just 40 km. away land sliding, cloud burst is a common phenomenon well composed but paradox of the poem is for the human beings to thrive for the money and willin to be rich in one night - destruction, a slow pace like rain as usual to give life to the earth well composed love you (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (8/23/2013 8:48:00 AM)

    floods are so destructive a gentle rain is ideal and so needed for nature to grow. a good write (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (8/23/2013 5:25:00 AM)

    We all need a little rain but with climate change some countries get floods and others droughts. A good write. (Report) Reply

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