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((((((((((((((((((((((((( RiDe ThE RaYs AnD CoMe To Me..ThE MeLoDy*********.FrOm ToP 500 POEMS
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The melody, you and me
say it again and let it rain LOVE TO ME,
In the castle, above the sea, waiting the blue.. waiting the white, waiting the boat,
TO THE WIND SCREAMING you to float, to climb the castle to kill ogre,
behind the gate, your soul mate about to vanish to suffocate
where is the great? where is the key?
it is with the saint confess to me,
why to hesitate?
it is your fate being me,
on my tears stop to skate.
so much hunger, so much thirst, for the taste, why to waste our moments, ? open the ways toward me ................. Iam the chaste, for you the nights I maintain, for you remain,
congested heart, , blocking the vein,
THE SOUL IN PAIN, reduce the strain and live in me,
obtain the days, the sorrow contain,
ride the rays and come to me the heart..you gain,
it is the fate, you are the soul she is the mate,
she can't bear your princess, you are the peer, come to her with her share all your fear
no one can rate more than her,
break the chain, both flare,
her place above flower, above tree,
soar with her, she is the bee,
come on date, why to wait?
where is the great? find the key
very far throw, deep in oceans, deep in sea,
THE MELODY you AND she
she is yours, you are hers,
TOGETHER YOU.. A MELODY
TaMaRa JaY HaNaRiNg
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Rafique Farooqi
(11/24/2009 5:50:00 AM) |
The melody, you and me
say it again and let it rain
LOVE TO ME,
In the castle, above the sea,
waiting the blue..
waiting the white,
waiting the boat,
IT IS VERY TOUCHING POEM, AND AMAZING WRITE
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Ian Bowen
(11/20/2009 12:06:00 PM) |
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** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ********************
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From: ****TaMaRa HaNaRinG.. (((((((SiLenCe)))))))
To: Ian Bowen
Date-Time: 11/18/2009 7: 55: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
Subject: scusi mua
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what do you mean by you know it is me..pardon me do you think iam free for all of you..iam a young lady who has other thing to think about..iam not old as you to set here and play non sense...
How cruel to mention my age...has this women no compassion?
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Meggie Gultiano
(11/9/2009 6:43:00 AM) |
So beautiful..Very romantic piece..Love it soooomuch, Tamara
Love♥ ♥ ♥
Meggie
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Patrick A. Martin
(10/16/2009 7:26:00 AM) |
This is a marvalous poem Tamara and coming from me that is saying something as I usally avoid LOVE POEMS like the plague.--10
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Joe Rosochacki
(10/15/2009 5:05:00 PM) |
Great visualizations. How true the premise.
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Elsee Daniel
(10/14/2009 12:53:00 PM) |
beautifull love poem......well done 10+
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Obinna Eruchie
(10/13/2009 1:42:00 PM) |
Words passionate as flames of fire are expressed beautifully.
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hannah brandeberry
(10/1/2009 10:23:00 AM) |
your passion for another is like fire :) good poem
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