The Silent Sword

Rookie - 14 Points (April 2,1997)

Snowfire - Poem by The Silent Sword

Feel the direction of the wind,
The breath of the Earth that guides me.
Carrying away an ending life,
The shattered soul that dies free.

Dancing in the clouded sky,
The heavenly world where we float.
Never will they read our lives,
The written script, the burning note.

Surfing the currents of day and night,
We see the world down below.
See it all on the eternal flight.
The combining energies fall like snow.

Ever we fall on the lap of hope.
Peace of the mind, peace of the soul.
Living on is to fight and cope,
Follow the heart cemented whole.

Remember me for the way I am,
A forgiving silence to be admired.
Embers remain where I began.
The buried soul beneath ash-fire.

Comments about Snowfire by The Silent Sword

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (10/27/2012 8:17:00 PM)

    Beautiful write. I like it (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 4 Points Darkangel Flyfree (10/26/2012 3:44:00 PM)

    Wow, I really like this poem! You show a lot of talent here! I do wonder if thats how it is afterlife when our souls are free! Truely amazing and beautiful! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alex Daydream (10/26/2012 2:49:00 PM)

    This is such a beautiful poem. The title intrigued me and then I read it several times just to make sure I read every word. Definitely going on my favourite poems list! I can't believe how talented you are; your poetry is truly inspiring! Keep writing and I'll keep reading! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 24, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 25, 2012

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